I COULD WRITE A BATTLE VERSE THAT'LL HAVE YOU SADDLE A HEARSE
SPIT A LOVE SONG SO STRONG THAT IT’LL MAKE HER PUSSY BURST
I DON’T KNOW WHAT’S WORSE, WHEN I CURSE FROM THE PLEASURE OR PAIN
ONE JUST PISSES ME OFF WHILE THE OTHER'S LEAVING A STAIN
OFF THE TOP I SPIT ORIGINAL STILL I’M INVISIBLE TO MOST
YOU CAN'T SEE ME JUST BELIEVE ME AND TO THAT WE CAN TOAST
AND TO THOSE WHO OPPOSE, I'M RELEASING YOUR GHOST
LET ME WELCOME YOU TO THE WORLD OF YOUR EGREGIOUS HOST
PAY ATTENTION TO THE SCHEME, IT'S MY INVENTION BY DESIGN
NOT TO MENTION MY DISENTION GIVES INCETIVE TO THE RHYME
THE ILLEST TIMEING IS INSIDE ME YES, THE BEATS IN MY CHEST
GET YA WEIGHT UP AND PRAY THAT I DON'T PUT YOU TO REST
I'M STRAIGHT UP AND MADE UP OF A SUBSTANCE FROM A DEPTH
SO DEEP THAT I'LL CREEP ON RUSSIANS PLAYING ROULLETTE
THEN SLEEP WHILE PERCUSSION PIECES PLAY IN MY HEAD
WHILE DREAMING OF A SCHEME THAT’S MORE EXTREME THAN THE NEXT

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OFF THE TOP I SPIT ORIGINAL STILL I’M INVISIBLE TO MOST
YOU CAN'T SEE ME JUST BELIEVE ME AND TO THAT WE CAN TOAST
AND TO THOSE WHO OPPOSE, I'M RELEASING YOUR GHOST
LET ME WELCOME YOU TO THE WORLD OF YOUR EGREGIOUS HOST
^Nice, man. I see you work'n with the schemes more. I like it.

Your vocab has always been sharp n those multies are hitt'n strong too. I'm glad you're keep'n the rhymes smooth, I think you've improved a WHOLE lot.

THANKS FOR SETTING THE BAR!

Much appreciated Killa!

I love your flow, it'z very much percise and consistent and smooth. The content is also to my liking, I especially liked the russian roulette line. And like Leo said, you set the bar pretty high.

Thanks Miss!

This was a fun rhyme for me. I plan to record this eventually. Stay tuned.